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KerfuffleMach2's sketches and stuff.

 
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KerfuffleMach2



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 2:13 am    Post subject: KerfuffleMach2's sketches and stuff.  Reply with quote

Well, I have a few drawing things I'd like to share. Also, since I'm currently taking a drawing class, I will have more. And, my game design classes have me doing art stuff, so I'll show those things here too. When they're done.

First up, a sketch I did years ago. Not that great, but I like it.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 2:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Early sketch of Selvik. I'm working on doing newer sketches of my characters. Once their done, I'll put them up.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 1:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is part of the final project for my Intro to Computer Applications class.

The class mainly deals with Illustrator, Photoshop, Flash, and Dreamweaver.

The final is to first, pick a game. For this game, we have to make a new logo in Illustrator, a new cover art in Photoshop, and make an animated logo and animate one character in Flash.

My game of choice was Kingdom Hearts II.

So, here is the first step I did for the logo.

Basically, I found a picture of a Keyblade, put it in Illustrator as the bottom layer, then traced it with the pen tool.

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Here is step number two. Which is starting to color it.

Which is starting to be a pain in the butt. But, I'll get it done.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 2:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alrighty.

It is finished.

My new logo for Kingdom Hearts II.

Ready?

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very nice, I like it except for a few things.

1: The split Heartless and Nobody symbol.
I would suggest to change it to just either one or the other. I just don't think it looks very good split up into the two.

2: Make the lettering bubble and more shiny.
It doesn't look very right with the letters all granite like that.

And I just noticed a third thing.
3: Don't be afraid to cover up the keyblade with the letters. Have the word Hearts centered under the Kindgdom.

These are just my suggestions. I think it would look better with those changes. But what the crap do I know?
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 2:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The hilt looks flat compared to the blade and the chain.  And the background should probably have some shading so it's not flat, as well. I'd suggest fixing that, along with the fiery moneky's suggestions.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 5:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The key looks really nice to me.

I find the lettering a little hard to read, but otherwise, nifty logo.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 11:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the suggestions. Luckily, even though this is part of the final, we will have time to improve it from now till then. So after I turn it in, I'll spend some time working on it.

One thing I wanted to say about a suggestion, I wanted to have half of the Heartless and Nobody symbols because this game deals with both of them, and their connection. So, I feel it should have both. And I thought it would look cool having half of one on top of the Keyblade and half of the other below it.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 11:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*shrug* I just don't really like the way they look together half and half.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 11:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm with ape.  It doesn't look like it flows well...maybe if you have the red shading down into a white and make the heartless symbol a bit thicker?
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 11:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well...I do have one other idea that I could do for the final, updated one. Which would have the symbols kind of intertwined with each other.

That's what I'll probably do for the final one.

But, for the one due Tuesday, this will work.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 12:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alrighty. My next project is done. Which was to use Photoshop to make a cover art for the same game as my logo.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like the bottom, but Maleficent really shouldn't be seethrough...it doesn't look quite right...but that's just my opinion.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 10:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The reason I made Maleficent see-through is because she isn't really the main threat any more. It transitions to a new threat. Organization XIII.

At least, that was my thought process behind it.

Thanks for the comment.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alrighty, time for some non-computer art again!

I made this the other day out of a boredom attack. I made it with markers of varying shades of gray, black masking tape, a pencil, and an Exacto knife.

The paper was bigger than my scanner, so some of it got cut off. But that edge you see to the right, with the random cracking or however you want to describe it, that goes all the way around it.

Those letters are my initials, JLB II. That symbol in the background is a symbol I've created for a series I'm working on with a friend. My characters in town come from this series. It's the lightning symbol.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 12:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

And this is a sketch of Zel I did tonight.

Please excuse the quality. My scanner made it really light, so I had to mess with it in Photoshop to make it darker. And, I'm not that great with Photoshop yet, or else I probably could've done a better job.

I really don't like how the face turned out. But, that was the best I could do to make it look alright. Also, the hair didn't turn out quite right.

I really like how the belt looks.

If you can't tell, she's kinda floating in the air, which is why one foot is raised up, and there's a shadow below her.

So, what do you all think?

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 2:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alrighty, my next school project. It's got two parts.

First is animated Donald.

Next is animated logo.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 11:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok, this is the first part of the final. The final was to update all three projects.

So, here is the updated logo.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 12:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ohhh, I like that one very much, though perhaps tone down the two flares a little.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 8:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah. I've been getting mixed comments about the flares. Some people say tone them down, some say their good, and some say it needs more.

Also, thanks to Wukei for suggesting I mess with the hilt more. I probably wouldn't have done anything with it otherwise.


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